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【题目要求】
People are frequently confronted with huge amounts of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think the advertising industry exerts an influence upon people’s lives? And what measures could be adopted to counter the risk of the disastrous effects?
【题目翻译】
应对竞争，不同公司打出各式各样的广告，霎时间，铺天盖地的广告向人们席卷而来!
广告在多大程度上影响了人们的生活?应该采取哪些措施应对广告所带来的不良影响?
【题目关键词】
advertisements; exert an influence upon; adopt measures
【写作小贴士】
此类题目是典型的blended essay的写法，开头结尾相对容易，body paragraphs分为两段展开，按照题目提问的先后顺序：首先，第一问可以写广告所带来的诸多benefits，比如：广告让我们更加清晰了解产品特点getting a better understanding of how the products work;成为大多数企业的收入来源sources of revenue;部分广告向人们宣传健康生活方式，让人们生活更加幸福快乐more contented。当然也可以写drawbacks，例如：很多商业广告的虚假宣传误导了消费者消费misleading customers;部分广告内容低俗，对青少年的身心发展不利negative effects on mental health;广告泛滥使广告形象大打折扣contribute to a bad self-image。其次，针对问题提出解决的solutions，这里可以从政府的角度切入，广告利弊兼有，政府应当积极引导，以便广告更好地服务于民众。
【写作语汇一览表】
1.in response to an advertisement回应广告
2.commercials商业广告
3.informative传递信息
4.hooks圈套
5.tricks and catchy phrases花言巧语
6.Advertising is now a circus-show.广告现在就像是在进行马戏表演。
7.be immune to the influence of advertising不受广告的影响
8.subtle不易察觉
9.a great variety of beautiful products玲琅满目的商品
【写作例句推荐】
1. The effect advertising has on our society may be subtle, and most of us remain unaware of how it molds us to fill in the particular company’s needs.
2.While advertising is useful for a host of things, from selling products, to putting public announcements on the air, some of the effects are detrimental as they can intentionally misrepresent “real” people in their commercials.
文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段。
Living in a mordern society , people are surrouned by ADs. You are able to see ads in any way , at any time , in any forms. You can see a poster pasted on the bus when you are on the street; you may receive a flyer when you are shopping with your friends; you can see a lot of ads in the TV when you watches the programs .Sometimes , ads make things much more attractive and beautiful that you are desired to buy. Meanwhile ,problmes are brought out .As the ads do a great effect to the sales result, some ads producer may even lie on ads in order to attract more customers. In result , you are confused and you don't know which is reliable .Futhermore ,some ads are so ingoring . However, it's undeniable that ads also have a positive influences in our lifes. It extends your sight and it's a way to spread the good things. In fact， everything has two sides, it's your choice to pick the side. As for the side effect about ads, I suppose our government can do something about it to prevent people from harms caused by conterfeit ads since we don't have a choice to choose the ads. Also , some ads producer may think about it and make our lives better.
