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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；请注意分段。
Since several centuries went,human being has made a great progress in many aspects of society so as to promote people's living standard to a great extent.There is no denying that advanced science and technology plays an increasingly important role in all respects of human life. It is commonly believed that high and new technology has certainly bring benefit to mankind leading to a more convenient and better life.However, the healthy development draws public attention on these all the time.Ordinary people from different sectors of society have a heated debate on the controversial issue and argument on both sides is supported by sound reasons.Some people put more emphasis on the rapid development of economy and steady growth of people's living standard is the inevitable result of social development and a symbol of social progress,and it is technology that makes contributions to the society undoubtedly and laying a solid foundation .While others attach great importance to natural resources and environmentally-friendly materials and take many factors into account,from another perspective,and the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology also exert negative effects on ecological environment when the human race takes effective measures to improve daily life.To begin with,compared with the education in the past,way of learning has been widened.Secondly,ordinary people prefer to do some reading,play a game and have a chat online rather than do so in a short distance just as face to face.Thirdly,these diseases that could not be cured in the past have been improved and medical treatment and public health is beneficial to more and more persons strengthening the ability to protect against the illness.On the contrary,as the proverb goes,“Every coin has two sides.”Admittedly,running after immediate interest blindly will make the environment around us suffered from heavier pressure. To sum up,personally,we should focus time and energy on how to keep harmony development and maintain ecological balance relieving environmental stress.The human being should take the essence and discard the dregs, integrate theory with practice and make full use of advanced technology because we still have a long way to go.
