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I believe that human being can work out with environment .Human race produce the carbon dixoide while plants absorb it .It's a evidence of living balance. In latest years , human start pay attention to the environomental proctection since we are surferring from it ,such as servere weather , globel warmming ,etc. Some people may assume it's too late to taks actions to protect our plants which I don't agree. Better late than never .There are a lot of things we can do about it : plant trees , use renewable energy . It's ok to make mistakes as long as you are willing to make it right . Therefore, I hope everyone can make a effort to build our environment .Union is strength. In the other way , government is supposed to launched some rules to excute it .
