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To every students Recently,there are more universities are set up varies of course.In order to open our's eyes and increase our knowledges,many schools added some different course.Like literature,plants,dance , sing or other exercise... Students can choose your favorate class.If you have intresting in it,It can accomplish our's dream.some students choose the literature course because they like reading.The class will provide you a very quiet environment to come ture.other students decide the plants course due to they like draw some pictures.Therefore,the class can make you realise some new friends who you have same hobbies.Also if you very like singing and dancing,you can enter in performance class.The teacher would teach you some beautiful cance... Now,instance yourself,you can choose your best wishes.If you jion us,we can assignment your dream.We think everyone should have their's dream,so we give you a chance.we can let you dream come ture.