2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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it`s good .it is good. it is very good.it is good for us to eat and drink and repeat.everything is possible.please believe me,that i can see that flowers are opening.paper is out.while computer is growing up.i can player computer games which my mother is not able to.let`s be better than before every decade.