2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

it`s good .it is good. it is very good. it is good for us to eat and drink and repeat.everything is possible.please believe me,that i can see that flowers are opening. Next,paper is out.while computer is growing up.i can player computer games which my mother is not able to.let`s be better than before every decade.