2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

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with the strengthen of the communication of the world , each country 's culture has linked together.the culture of course contain the festivals. and now, china also deeply influenced by the western festivals. in today , more and more chinese are devoted to celebrate the western festivals. even , they would pay much attention to celebrate. for this , it is due to the link with the global communication. now every country's relationship have a great breakthrough. and the country's culture also would join each other in. but however , to celebrate western festivals is formal . it respect the communication of the country. but it should have a degree. if it only celebrate the western festivals and ignore our nations festivals, it would forget our original perspective. we should concetraced on our nations festivals , and have the choice to celebrate the western festivals.