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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear Mr Wang, I was writing this letter to you for I have decided to quit my job.I won't forget how happy and appreciated was I when I got such a promising position two months ago.However,I have to resign for reasons as follows: The key problem is my character.First,I take things more carefully and pursue perfect so that I always dare not to accomplish the work of edit.Second,to be a good editor,it need more open-minded and dare which I didn't have. I'm very sorry that I can't cherish this opportunity and maybe bring some inconvenience for our company.I won't forget for your teaching me a lot,both in work and life relationship. Yours,sincerely Ling Ming
可可英语 - 划词释义
