2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays online shopping is becoming more and more popular.Not only the young people shop online,even the old people. Online shopping makes our life more convenient and comfortable ,we don't need to go out,just stay at home,and we can buy the goods at home. Though online shopping has many benefits to us,it also has some shortages.Some vendors are not honest.When you receive the goods you find you are cheated.The goods you received are different from it described on the internet .And when you want to repay them,you found it is hopeless.They will not help you to return the goods.Even they agree to return,it would spend you more than 1 month. So I suggest we can buy the goods on some famous shop.Such as Jing Dong,Dang Dang.These shops can prove their quality of goods and services.