2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；简单句比重稍微偏高，文中有句子错误；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细；请注意分段。

Nowadays,computer have become an important part of our life. Due to the high technoledge, computer bring us a more convinent and easy life.For example,It including on-line class and on-line office,thus making many woker woking at home,which called SOHO. As we can see the advantages of computer,it's also have some disadvantages,