文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
In accordance with what is demonstrated in the curve diagram,we can observe distinctly that some significant changes have taken place in the past years in terms of the number of Internet users in China.In the late 1980s there were merely several hundred users nevertheless,by 1998 the number hit 2.1 million and just one year later it rocketed to 8.9 million. It is of no difficulty for us to come up with some factors to illustrate these changes.In the first place,the tremendous amount of information on the Internet benefits the users.A few clicks of mouse will lead them to the information they want.Therefore,a lot of people regard the internet as their sources of information.In the second place,the Internet facilitates mutual communication.Folks in different countries or areas can discuss interesting topics via Internet without meeting each other.Talks over the Internet have transcended geographical barriers completely.Thus the number of Internet users increases sharply. Taking into account what has been discussed so far,one conclusion can be safely concluded that the present situation will continue for quite a while in the near future.But we should not ignore the side effects of Internet on children,who may indulge in it,or even visit pornographic websites.Therefore,proper measures need introducing to provide a healthy environment for all users.
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