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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国小城镇的用电量

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In accordance with what is demonstrated in the curve diagram,we can observe distinctly that some significant changes have taken place in the past years in terms of the number of Internet users in China.In the late 1980s there were merely several hundred users nevertheless,by 1998 the number hit 2.1 million and just one year later it rocketed to 8.9 million. It is of no difficulty for us to come up with some factors to illustrate these changes.In the first place,the tremendous amount of information on the Internet benefits the users.A few clicks of mouse will lead them to the information they want.Therefore,a lot of people regard the internet as their sources of information.In the second place,the Internet facilitates mutual communication.Folks in different countries or areas can discuss interesting topics via Internet without meeting each other.Talks over the Internet have transcended geographical barriers completely.Thus the number of Internet users increases sharply. Taking into account what has been discussed so far,one conclusion can be safely concluded that the present situation will continue for quite a while in the near future.But we should not ignore the side effects of Internet on children,who may indulge in it,or even visit pornographic websites.Therefore,proper measures need introducing to provide a healthy environment for all users.

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