2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强，且注意拼写错误。

As well as we know ,computer plays an important role in our daily life .More and more people are need computer. If we use computer properly we will have a better life. On the on hand, computer can help us work more quickly and easlier .We can use it look for information and watch TV and read book and so on .On the other hands ,many people use it play game and addictde into it even fogert the real world .That very terrible . It is overwleming that computer plays an imporant role in our daily life .We must use it welly and make it more workful.