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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36951
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分55.5分
评语:

单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化。

用户练习作文:

My friend I have a lot of friends. Some of them knew in school, some in the company knew.some in society knew. School friends learn good, They are usually very hard, Often studies late into the night, Because they believe that knowledge can change fate; Those friends of the company very hard. They have parents, children need support in family. They are the pillars of the family. Other friends, some good, some very interesting. I have my happy these friends, I think, a friend is a kind of intangible wealth

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