小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

My friend I have a lot of friends. Some of them knew in school, some in the company knew,some in society knew. School friends learn good. They are usually very hard. Often studies late into the night. Because they believe that knowledge can change fate.Those friends of the company very hard. They have parents, children need support in a family. They are the pillars of the family. Other friends, some good, some very interesting.