作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细。
Nowday,wherever you go,you will hear that it is important for a little baby to have a good name.Fox example,there are some agents which give serval names to parents according to the baby's birthday.We know some superstars also changed their names, like Jack Cheng whose former name is Fang.However,concerning this phenomenon, opinions vary from person to person. Some people argue that name is importment for a kid's future and his/her fate of whole life.So they find the "experts" to have a name or change their names.There are some persons ,but,don't agree with the foemer.They maintain that name just is a sign which is convinent to communicate or interact. As far as I'm concerned,I think name is not very important for us.Firtly, it is a sign of someone and it convey the elders' good expections. Secondly,our futureshould be controlled by ourselves,not by the names.So the name is not very importment for us.