2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视。

As we can see from the table that the number of people in the given city is increasing rapidly.Especially in the past 5 years,the number sharply goes up from 4000 to 12000. Threre are several reasons for this phonomenon.In the first,people nowadays becoming better off due to the rapid development of the economy.Secondly,today tourism is booming and offer tourists better and cheaper service,which attracts lots of people,though they are not very wealthy.Last but not least,I think people themselves pay more attention to enjoy their life,so they choose to travel in their spare time. Maybe someone will say that this will cause damage to the environment if more and more people come to the same place.But I think the advantages outweigh the disadvatages.We can develop our econony in developing tourism.Also,people themselves can gain lots of what they can't learn from the book when they travel to other places.Finally,they can easily find out that what the world is happening in every trip.