3、这种现象可能产生的影响
表格:
1995 2000 2005
1万人 近4万 12万以上
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
As we can see from the table that the number of people in the given city is increasing rapidly.Especially in the past 5 years,the number sharply goes up from 4000 to 12000. Threre are several reasons for this phenomenon.In the first,people nowadays becoming better off due to the rapid development of the economy.Secondly,today tourism is booming and offer tourists better and cheaper service,which attracts lots of people,though they are not very wealthy.Last but not least,I think people themselves pay more attention to enjoying their life,so they choose to travel in their spare time. Maybe someone will say that this will cause damage to the environment if more and more people come to the same place.But I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.We can develop our economy in developing tourism.Also,people themselves can gain lots of what they can't learn from the book when they travel to other places.Finally,they can easily find out that what the world is happening in every trip.