作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
Nowday,wherever you go,you will hear that it is important for a little baby to have a good name.For example,there are some agents which give servial names to parents according to the baby's birthday.We know some superstars also changed their names, like Jack Cheng whose former name is Fang.However,concerning this phenomenon, opinions vary from person to person. Some people argue that name is importmant for a kid's future and his/her fate of whole life.So they find the "experts" to have a name or change their names.But there are some persons who don't agree with the former.They maintain that name just is a sign which is convenient to communicate or interact. As far as I'm concerned,I think name is not very important for us.Firtly, it is a sign of someone and it conveies the elders' good expections to kids. Secondly,our future should be controlled by ourselves,not by the names.So the name is not very importmant for us.