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Nowday,wherever you go,you will hear that it is important for a little baby to have a good name.For example,there are some agents which give servile names to parents according to the baby's birthday.We know some superstars also changed their names, like Jack Cheng whose former name is Fang.However,concerning this phenomenon, opinions vary from person to person. Some people argue that name is important for a kid's future and his/her fate of whole life.So they find the "experts" to have a name or change their names.But there are some persons who don't agree with the former.They maintain that name just is a sign which is convenient to communicate or interact. As far as I'm concerned,I think name is not very important for us.Firtly, it is a sign of someone and it conveys the elders' good expections to kids. Secondly,our future should be controlled by ourselves,not by the names.So the name is not very important for us.