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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Notice To all 2012 freshmen. We are going to organize an autumn trip to the botanical garden on December 27. According to the schedule, the touring will include visiting the botanical garden and watching an exhibition about man and nature. And then,we will go on a picnic in the garden. So please bring some food and drink. If you are interested in the activity, please come to the students union to enter your name before this thursday. You should assemble at the college gate at 7:00A.M. and you can leave your baggage in the left. Please be on time and hope you have a good time. The Students Union December 25
