2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

With the developing of the internet,more and more people choose to do something with the computer.For example,more and more people chose go shopping on line.some young people choose some online book. Different people hold different opinions.Someone think that computer is very convient foe them.with it,they can see thier child,who is studying at another place .besides,they can by something at anytime.what is more,they can lookfor the lastest news. however,some people do not agree with it.First of all,some child will learn some wrong way to dile with something,which they alaways do some wrong thing.what is wrong,they will waste more time to play games. as far as I am concerned,computer is a useful tool for me.we can choose knowledge,can talk with our friend,parents.