雅思写作范文:城市交通问题

文章层次较为清晰；复杂句的使用不是很丰富；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

With the developement of technology ,our lives is getting more and more convenient . The world became a small city thanks to the developed traffic tools. But at the same time ,cars raise traffic issues like traffic jamp,car accdients etc. As reported, there are hundreds and thousands accidents caused by cars and people injuried or dead . Besides, cars is one of the main sources of air and noise pollutions .More cars, severer weather .I suggest reduce the cars for all our sakes and I am going to begin from myself.