小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friends My friend is very beautiful,she come from china in ChangSha, she is twenty years old.she like paly football and paly badminton. she best like read book .she ofter library and buy many book. We are usually discuss book character.we are usually go shopping in week,this is my friends ,I like she