2007年6月英语四级作文真题:致欢迎辞

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Welcome to our club Welcome to our music club!If you like music or like listening to music,we are welcome you join us.In this club,there are so many students all like music.you can make friends with them.Also if you want wo become a star,we will provide you some good facilities and a professional teacher.So,don't considered a lot,please join us be quickly! Then ,we will introduce our club.In our team,there are so many teenagers who like music.First,if you want to attend it,you have to hand 30 yuans to us.It is VIP's status.Moreover,you can attend a music show with us.we can provide you varies of performance.In the end.if your friend whom like music or like listening to music,you can let him or her join us. Our club is a very good institution,we can give you a chance to create your dream.I think most young people should have a dream that you can become an musician or a singer,I think most of people all like misic.So, If you give us a chance,we can give you a dream.