2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句的使用，注意几处句子错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

In the modern society,computers are playing an important role in human beings life.as we know,the moden electronic products are created by human of course includes computer.so computer and man have a close connection. A lot of people become the computer users because of the rapid development of moden imformation and technolege.firstly, peopele use computer searching messages what they want on the net,secondly,they use it playing computer games,watching videos,listening music and so on.even more ,they can make friends on the net. computer is man,s good friend in sometime dgree. But in another side,many people especially young students are sinking into the net,it is harmful for their growth.computer just a tool for people have a better life ,we should deal well with the connection of computer and human ,using the computer in benefit sides.