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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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In the modern society,computers are playing an important role in human beings life.as we know,the modern electronic products are created by the human of course includes the computer.So computer and man have a close connection. A lot of people become the computer users because of the rapid development of modern information and technology.firstly, peopele use computer searching messages what they want on the net,secondly,they use it playing computer games,watching videos,listening music and so on.Even more,they can make friends on the net. computer is man,s good friend in someone degree. But in another side,many people especially young students are sinking into the net,it is harmful to them.Computer just a tool for people have a better life,we should deal well with the connection of computer and human,using the computer in benefit sides.

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