2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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nowadays,the computer is a important part of our lives.we use it in many ways,such as working,studing,playing grams.however,there are some different points about it.some people insist that it make our lives more colourful and convence.because we can shopping in the internet and watching tv ,listening .and then ,we can slip all kinds of imformation.others think that computer is a tool of wasting time .it brings many bad habbits.for example,the student can't study well ,just spent much time in playing grames.day after day,the student become more and more nagtive.so in my way,the computer is a good thing ,but under the way,we should use it in good way.and i believe,it wanne bring more to our