托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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At least in my case, perseverance makes me stronger. I used to persist in jogging. At that time, I felt better than I do now. Although sometimes I felt frustrated for not being rewarded after hard work. Nevertheless I can't deny the fact that most of the time things follow the rule that no gain without pain. In my opinion, perseverance not only makes people physically stronger, but also psychologically stronger. Perseverance requires great determination and resolution. Any vacillation may lead to ultimate failure. Thus we should keep steadfast in the career we are pursuing and be fully convinced that what we pay for our mission is worthwhile. Furthermore, we should have faith in ourselves to get inexhaustible motivation to accomplish our mission. All in all, I believe that perseverance makes people stronger. I will go forward with perseverance to make it better.