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Dear mom, I'm so sad to tell you that I have failed to run for moster. I though I can get the position if I worked hard.But it's not.Some people never do some real thing for our classmates but they get the position.Because they know peoples.It realy hurt me.But I will fine soon.No matter what,I will be myself and continue study hard. In addition,I hope you have a happy day. I'm looking for you respone. Love you Youdaugter Vicky
