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2005年专八英语作文真题:Interview: An Essential Step in Recruiting

发布时间:2013-05-18 16:45浏览次数:2561
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题目 Interview: An Essential Step in Recruiting
说明 Interview is frequently used by employers as a means to recruit prospective employees. As a result, there have been many arguments for or against the interview as a selection procedure. What is your opinion? Write an essay of about 400 words to state your view.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

By interview, employers can have a thorough understanding on the employees. During the interview, employees can show up their personalities. Who will be Recurited largely depended on his or her performance. Thus the significance of communicatioin is highlighted. Whoever possess a good interpersonal skills will definitely outweigh those who lacks the skill of communication. Through interview, the interviewers can get a chance to pry into the candidates' comprehensive abilities. Thus, in my opinion, interview is an essential step in recruiting.

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