2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

in recent years, in one city that more and more people choose to travel.the deta about this is following. in 1995, it have 1million people to travel. in 2000, the number of the people nearly about 4millions. and in 2005, the people to travel is reach the top of the 12millions.all this deta is showing that the travel is becoming a popular ways in our daily life. for this , it due to the pressure of the nowadays. with the pressure of the life, more and more people would like to choose the travel to relax and have a good mood. traveling would let the people to forget the stress from the life or work , and it is so funny.besides, with the abundance of the acknowledge ,people began to realize the importance of the field of the vision.so as to up their quality, many people would choose the travel to reach their acknowledge. all for the travelling people strengthen, the most outstanding profit is the tourism industry. it would urge the economy and strengthen the communication between the cities. and the people would have more quality.however, it is good for the whole society. no matter the personal or the world.