托福独立写作模拟题:关于宠物

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

in my opinion ,i agree with the statement the pets should be treated like family members.truly pets are different with us in many aspects ,and they will never be our real kids or spouse in the real life. however we keep the in order to give a home for them and have a new parterner to accompany us .as long as we regard they as our own familys,we will receive their most sinsere responds and live in harmony with them. for one thing the pets can make the seniors occupied.feeding , hanging out ,doing the washing are all time-consuming,which will help them in the feeling of they are still important.in the maintime less anxiety about death or illness would offend them which will do good to their health. for another ,the kids will be more warm-hearted treating the pets as their families.in the prosess of play with the pets ,kids can pick up the ability to take care of the little creatures,which will also apply to other people such as their younger siblings.the careness of others will silently emerge as they are taking a helping hand instinctively .isn't it a best chance to do some morality education as well as presenting them with a perfect friend to play with? above all ,the pets will in a state of health and happiness while getting along well with the human beings. we will fully enjoy the life accompanied by a little pet .