小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my best friend is cherry .she is my classmate ,and my neighborhood.she is a cure and clever girl.she always help me with my study.we go to together school every day ,aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa a a a a a a a a a a a a ai really thanks for her .i am gald to meet her.i hope that our friendship exist forever !