2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中用词稍显贫乏；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；请注意分段。

We can see that our human's life cannot go on without computer, it is so important to us. On the other hand, the computer disturb our daily life, it makes our life attach to computer and lost much opportunity. We must pay attention to the question, for we need a healthy body to fight for our dream.