小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friend is Eiva ,She is girl ,She is thin ,She like strawberry ice cream and chocolate ice cream and watermmelon ice cream and pineapple ice cream ,She is my sister ,She like playing jump rope ,I love she. my friend is Harry ,He is boy ,He is thin ,He like orange ,He like English ,He is my brother ,I love them very much.