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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；可适当增加几条从句；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
How to be a smart consumers As we know,many people buy things through plenty of coupons and Taobao on the Internet so as to save some money ,they think.But is it a wise way to consume?As for my opinion,they'd better not only focus on the discounts,but the quality and comfortableness when we are consuming . Certainly,,they seem to gain some profits from coupons ,but coupons will stimulate some of them to spend much more money .And when I received a VIP card about milk tea and it gave me 80% discounts every time,I was touched, thus,I bought it three or four times a week during that time.Last ,I throw VIP card then I ate milk tea once a month.Otherwise,it doesn't match with anyone,if people know how to control these coupons and not consume too much.In a word,to save is not spending much more money on buying the discounting things. Besides,those things which give coupons are always fit for dressing and dreadful quality.Please believe ,whatever methods the traders are using,the final winner is the trader.What's worse, some things are out of date and the traders don't promise to give things back and get our money if there is any problems. All in all,to be a wise consumer,they should learn to using the coupons wisely,in the process,I advise they to pay more attention to the quality and comfortbleness.Finally, consumers,every one of us,can gain the most profit .
