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Discussing about CCTV Spring Festival In recent years,there are so many people like to watch CCTV.It's a famous programme in China.Varies of people all like it,such as children,youngster,adult and old people.It likes present Chinese culture.I think whatvever you are a chinese or you are an foreigner,you also heard the CCTV's spring festival. But in recently,some people would want to cancel this prrgramme because they think the CCTV spring festival are worse than before.In past decades,the progarmme was boring and less funny.A lot of youngster and adult were given up this progarmme,they said:they would like to go out rather than stay at home and watvh CCTV spring festival.Now,the audience only about the children and old people.The latter watch it because they not have many activities,they only have to stay at home to watch TV. For my opinion,i feel we can't give up this progarmme.Because not only it presented our chinese culture but also it was our parents and our grandparents liked TV show.I think we really hope that our parents can living in a warm environment.So,i wish CCTV spring festival can become better than now.
