作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Many people are fond of watching the Spring Festival evening party.The Spring Festival evening party is an annual activities celebrated on new year Eve.There are many programs are play in the party,it is very magnificent. But someone thinks that the party should be leave off.There are some reasons for why some people want to leave off the party.On one hand,considering to the cost of the party,they think that it is so unworthy and very waste.On the other hand,take the content of the party to considering,the values of this programs are become to not more importance than before. In my view,the Spring Festival evening party can be host ones for two years.That's not only to save money but also can preparing well.