小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friend is Eiva ,She is a girl ,She is thin ,She likes strawberry ice cream and chocolate ice cream and watermelon, ice cream and pineapple ice cream ,She is my sister ,She like playing jump rope ,I love she. my friend is Harry ,He is a boy ,He is thin ,He like orange ,He likes English ,He is my brother ,I love them very much.