作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Many people are fond of watching the Spring Festival evening party.The Spring Festival evening party is an annual activities celebrated on new year Eve.There are many programs played in the party,it is very magnificent. But someone thinks that the party should be left off.There are some reasons for why some people want to leave off the party.On the one hand,considering to the cost of the party,they think that it is so unworthy and very waste.On the other hand,take the content of the party to considering,the values of the program become to not more importance than before. In my opinion,the Spring Festival evening party can be held once every two years.That's not only to save money but also can prepare well.