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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10533
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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文章词汇表达丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

According to the instance, different people have different opinion about it. Some people say that this doing is to provide a better service which others support to promote Mandarin. From my point of view, I agree more with the latter. First, Mandarin is a major language in China that every citizen should use it fluently in public place. From the age of liberation till now, our central government is promoting the Mandarin used in public place. It stands a glorious of a nation. If every citizen says different dialects, our nation can not be union and not to mention development of any aspect. Second, Mandarin promoting will lead to conbinent communication. In the example that the employees are busy in learning dialects. I think it isn't an effective way, because learning a language is not an easy job. The unacceptable solution will increase the work load of the employees and result in a bad aftermath. So learning Mandarin is an effective and easy way for every citizen to do. It also convinent for communicating when everybody uses a same language. Third, using Mandarin doesn't mean giving up dialects. Dialects are full of local cultural characteristics which go through a long history. We promote Mandarin, in the meantime, we should maintain and protect dialect, because it i the fruits of our ancestors and common wealth of our whole nation. All in all, Mandarin is a common language for people to communicate in public and keeping protect the dialects.

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