2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

what follows is a survey about education pays.The source is the Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey. From overall looks, we can see that conclude kinds of strips.Left is red,the content is unemployment rate in 2011. Right is blue, the title say:" Median weekly earnings in 2011". In between have 8 types respondents.From bottom to top, the red one is gradually decrease,but the blue is gradually increase.