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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第47篇:好室友是什么样的?

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:51浏览次数:2200
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作文题目:

Colleagues are the people who work with us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good colleague?

Use specific details and examples in your answer.

室友是跟我们一起生活的那个人。依你看,好室友是什么样的?给出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I never thought I would have heterosexual roommates. But it happens. Perhaps this is what we call serendipity. Although it may soon go to an end and I would probably regret that I had not cherish the opportunity. Whatever I can do now is trying to get rid of the self-indulgence and to go all out to make it up. A good roommate should be tolerant, I suppose. As we come from different backgrounds, our personalities and habits may be widely divergent. That is wherever tolerance is badly needed. Perhaps I will always have my moments of introspection from now on. My next step is to make the compensation and, of course, accomplish the Civil Affairs Department's Redemption. My next heterosexual roommate stands a good chance of being my wife. So, I won't let you down, my will-be roommate.

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