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After several months, I am going to leave my university. During the four years, I have learned how to solve problem by myself. It is useful skill for me to adjust my future job. First of all, I can deal with the questions during my study. In university, we can't avaliable to ask teachers for help except in class. When I study after class and come about some confusing. I would read the book again and again, or surface on the Internet to find more information. Gradually, I like thinking and finding thee answers by myself. Then, I can take care myself. My university is far from my hometown,so I can't go home regularly. I have to take care of my own life. I should wash clothes, buy fruits, and cook meals. Although, at the begining, it is not easy for me to do, my parents can't come to my school to help me. Moreover, I can do some housework during vocations at home. It is luckily. Finally, I should communicate when I go out to handle business. Take my own experience for example. Once I wanted to apply the passport t HongKong. I should go on the Internet to check what kind of papers I have to take. Then I went to the counter to as how to apply e passport. Finally, I have applied smooth. This experience is valiable to me. Although all these skills are simply to somebody, to me, these are valueless. It can help me how to adjust my future way, my future family and my future job.
