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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
文中学术词汇使用较丰富,但请注意积累词汇量;熟练使用了一些长难句;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Resume Name:Liming_______ Sex:a boy______ Date of birth: Iune 15th,1986_____ Marital status:Weihun________ Job objective: foreign trade clerk_______________________________ Education background: I graduated from English department of the North University ___________________________ Personal skills: First,my studies are all excellent,and have great English comprehension in listening ,speaking and writing.Sencond I have radical speaking comprehension in German.In addition,I am acquainted with process of foreign trade. _____________________________________ Hobbies: I like playing basketball,sing songs and see movies______________________________________