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on Excessive packaging With the development of economics,more and more gifts all have a good packaging.As we all knows,every presents all need a sample packaging,but not excessive packaging.However,why are the goods have so many and complex packaging? There are list three reasons:first,we should know that what is the most important thing they considerate when the cusmers who buy the goods,they will care about the surface of the goods,the more beauty packaging the more sales.The second reason is about our face,the better goods the better surfasion.Finally,is the most important keys is that the level of people's live promote. As far as I concerned,excessive packaging is a not good thing,because it will waste the resources and environment.