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with the improvement of informational technique ,more and more electric books play a role in our life ,as fast as the science developing ,it comes a debate whether electric books will replace the position of traditional reading when we get information .here is the common situation that some people give their votes to the replacement between the contemporary and traditional reading way,while others stand by the contract side . From my point of view , i suggest that we should not lose both of them in our daily study life .The following points can suppose my own though about the foregoing debate . First , it is obvious that the electricity products give us a immense amount of convenient and comfortable experience in reading. every individual can
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