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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

作者能能准确使用学术词汇,但总体词汇丰富度欠缺;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

With the rapid development of the economy,the internet plays a more and more important role in our daily life,all of us can not deny it.As is known to all the internet is of great importance,from my perspetive,i think the internet do good to our international communication.People can communicate with each other through the internet instead of having a face-to-face communication.In other words,it is convenient for us to have a talk with our friends.Futhermore,if we are engaged with our things,we can leave a message by internet.It is so easy for us.Finally ,if we are quarrled with our friends,it is also a better way to deal with it.To sum up,the internet is beneficial to international communication.

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