题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Do you have good habits?Could you keep them?Do you know what result good habits? In fact,good habits result from resisting temptation.From example,we all know that exercise in the morning is good for our body,however,less people can keep exercise all year round.Many people want to stay in their warm bed instead of picking up clothes and running in the cold wind when winter coming.They would say,oh,this is too difficult for me.The outdoor bi too cold to bear.However,their still some determined people can do it,even snowy.What different with them is that they have a strong will to resist temptation. Good habits is the fruit of insist resisting temptation and be strict with yourself. There are many ways to achieve your goal to keep good habits.Such as,we can make a time plan and find someone to nag at us .What most important but no least ,be persevering.