文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。
nowadays, most of students pay less attention to spelling of studying english.they often spend more time in listerning to english and speaking it .although they are both important .students should give attention to spelling.a good artical is based on words.therefore ,we should spell right words in english writen. as a result of this sitution,the main reason is that they put listerning to english into a important place.they prefer watching english movies rath than write article .because many a student doesn't want to remember vocabulary .it is difficult for them to remember. thus ,they have a poor voabulary and often make mistakes in english-spelling. however ,in my views ,words is foundational of article .we should expand our vocabulary and pay more attention to spelling .only in this way can we improve our english ability .